LadyButterfly she/her@piefed.blahaj.zoneM to NiceMemes@sopuli.xyzEnglish · 24 days agoNature finds a waypiefed.cdn.blahaj.zoneexternal-linkmessage-square25fedilinkarrow-up1470
arrow-up1470external-linkNature finds a waypiefed.cdn.blahaj.zoneLadyButterfly she/her@piefed.blahaj.zoneM to NiceMemes@sopuli.xyzEnglish · 24 days agomessage-square25fedilink
minus-squareBrem@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up60·24 days agoI am but a waiting weed Needing for the train Air conditioner over me I pretend it’s rain
minus-squareBrem@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up19·edit-224 days agoIf a haiku is 5x7x5, what is 7x5x7x5? Super reverse haiku? Seriously, though. Does this count as haiku? Edit: Nevermind ~ it’s not a thing. But it works great. So I name it Bremku, henceforth.
minus-squareOwOarchist@pawb.sociallinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up19·24 days agoBut a waiting weed Train’s A/C stops over me I pretend it’s rain There, I fixed it for you.
minus-squareBrem@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up9·edit-224 days agoI have a new friend Who made a Bremku into A brand new haiku ~ your’s is wonderful!!! thank you so much!!!
minus-squareOwOarchist@pawb.sociallinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up6·edit-224 days agoJust your friendly neighborhood English major, doing my civic duty. o7
minus-squareBrem@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up5·24 days agoEnglish major plans Civic Duty Spiderman Words like web from cans
minus-squarejadejitsu@sopuli.xyzlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up3·edit-224 days agoI, a waiting weed Train’s A/C drips over me This, for want of rain
minus-squareOwOarchist@pawb.sociallinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up2·24 days agoHeh, yeah. Could definitely be refined further. But I wanted to keep edits to a minimum.
minus-squareAniki@feddit.orglinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up4·24 days agowhat is even the deal with haikus? why are they considered so great?
minus-squareForeverComical@lemmy.calinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up7·24 days agoFor me the cadence makes it feel like intro development conclusion. It’s like a short story in poetic format
minus-squareBrem@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up9·24 days agoI am but a wanting weed Growing with the Sun The train has rolled right over me My life has been undone
minus-squareBrem@lemmy.worldlinkfedilinkEnglisharrow-up5·24 days agoI am but a thriving weed Dulled not once, but twice Let them bring it back to me I shall sow it thrice!
I am but a waiting weed
Needing for the train
Air conditioner over me
I pretend it’s rain
If a haiku is 5x7x5, what is 7x5x7x5?
Super reverse haiku?
Seriously, though. Does this count as haiku?
Edit: Nevermind ~ it’s not a thing. But it works great. So I name it Bremku, henceforth.
But a waiting weed
Train’s A/C stops over me
I pretend it’s rain
There, I fixed it for you.
I have a new friend
Who made a Bremku into
A brand new haiku
~ your’s is wonderful!!! thank you so much!!!
Just your friendly neighborhood English major, doing my civic duty. o7
English major plans
Civic Duty Spiderman
Words like web from cans
I, a waiting weed
Train’s A/C drips over me
This, for want of rain
Heh, yeah. Could definitely be refined further. But I wanted to keep edits to a minimum.
I think that’s just… A poem
Oh. Didn’t know 'em.
what is even the deal with haikus? why are they considered so great?
For me the cadence makes it feel like intro development conclusion.
It’s like a short story in poetic format
I am but a wanting weed
Growing with the Sun
The train has rolled right over me
My life has been undone
I am but a thriving weed
Dulled not once, but twice
Let them bring it back to me
I shall sow it thrice!